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Friday, November 2, 2018

Te Kauru Camp 2018 - (Writing 2nd Draft)



  Fear Fall

The ride STOPPED and kept going and then STOPPED again , I was absolutely HORRIFIED! … Then it dropped extremely fast , when that happened I couldn’t breathe one single inch! . The ride was just about to finish. I thought we all were gonna be flattened like a pancake! .

Fear fall

Brylee checking her self out xD

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9 comments:

  1. Debbie ThompsonNovember 5, 2018 at 1:34 PM

    Excellent description Aanaiah. I especially enjoyed your similie 'flattened like a pancake', it really took me back to my ride on the Fear Fall!

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  2. UnknownNovember 6, 2018 at 1:41 PM

    Nice Aanaiah

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    1. UnknownNovember 7, 2018 at 1:32 PM

      Thank you so much ;)

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    2. UnknownNovember 7, 2018 at 1:38 PM

      hi aanaiah please make some more of your fabulous blogs
      Brylee :)

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  3. UnknownNovember 7, 2018 at 1:37 PM

    wow great posts

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  4. UnknownNovember 7, 2018 at 1:41 PM

    nice blog Aanaiah the fear fall is extremely horrifying

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  5. AnonymousNovember 9, 2018 at 10:27 AM

    Hi Aanaiah My name is Ellawisha from tautoro school XD LOL blog you later

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  6. UnknownNovember 9, 2018 at 10:31 AM

    its funny that brylee was checking her self out( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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  7. UnknownNovember 16, 2018 at 10:15 AM

    Nice( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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